分析 这是一篇图表作文.内容是介绍中秋节.时态主要为一般现在时.人称主要为第三人称.写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文.其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点:1时间:每年阴历八月十五日.2方式:在那一天,人们通常回家与家人共聚晚餐.人们还会吃月饼,有各种各样的月饼,比如豆馅、蛋黄馅、果仁馅或肉馅等.晚饭过后,许多人喜欢赏月3象征:人们认为月亮是团圆、运气、财富的象征,在那天人们互相表达美好的祝福.常用到的重点短语:go back 回到…a symble of …标志each other 彼此all kinds of 多样的【高分句型】1.The Mid-autumn Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in Chinaone of+the+最高级+名词复数 最怎么样的某某之一,最高级的用法2.On that day,people usually go back home to enjoy a large meal with their family.动词不定式做目的状语3.People believe①that the moon is a symbol of reunion,luck and fortune,②so they express best wishes to each other on that day.①that引导的宾语从句,作为believe的宾语②so表示所以.连词,表示因果关系,引出下文.
解答 The Mid-autumn Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China.【高分句型】It is on August 15th of the Lunar calendar every year.(每年阴历八月十五日.)On that day,people usually go back home to enjoy a large meal with their family.【高分句型】They also eat mooncakes.There are all kinds of mooncakes,some have bean paste in them,and some have egg-yolk,nuts,meat or other things inside.After dinner,many people like to appreciate the moon.(方式在那一天,人们通常回家与家人共聚晚餐.人们还会吃月饼,有各种各样的月饼,比如豆馅、蛋黄馅、果仁馅或肉馅等.晚饭过后,许多人喜欢赏月) People believe that the moon is a symbol of reunion,luck and fortune,so they express best wishes to each other on that day.(人们认为月亮是团圆、运气、财富的象征,在那天人们互相表达美好的祝福)【高分句型】
点评 本题是一篇以提纲提供情景的作文,内容是向外国朋友介绍中国的传统节日-中秋节,写作时要注意要点齐全,不能漏写,并且要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性,使整篇短文意思连贯,表达流畅.